Feedback on Bird Nights

by janeeatonhamilton

My story “Bird Nights” came out on numerocinqmagazine.com last week.  Tonight, I found a comment about it:
carriec says:

Painful writing. Beautifully so. And so brave; I had forgotten writing can be like smashing glass. Then later the reader mistakes that brave, hard smashing for a bird song. Thanks for this one. It really does sing.
Thanks, carriec.